Author Topic: Deer Haiku (Read 8825 times)

WDFW-SUX · « **on:** October 15, 2009, 04:58:30 PM »

elusive, alert
always careful, muley buck
hunting season starts

boneaddict · « **Reply #1 on:** October 15, 2009, 05:09:50 PM »

Amen......I think you even did it right.

boneaddict · « **Reply #2 on:** October 15, 2009, 05:14:06 PM »

Steelhead or Muley
Rut or Red it is the fall
Lock and load, fish on

WDFW-SUX · « **Reply #3 on:** October 15, 2009, 05:18:28 PM »

yours is better.

boneaddict · « **Reply #4 on:** October 15, 2009, 05:28:59 PM »

Always a conflict this time of year. SOme of the best fishing and obviosuly hunting is at its peak. I grew up on the Methow, (feel sorry for me) then as I graduated kind of out of my hunting phase (hard to imagine) I went on the road fishing mostly Canada right now. The kings, coho and chum on the Vedder. Not much better than that. Now I am into my hunting/photography phase. Wonder if I'll ever fish again.

WDFW-SUX · « **Reply #5 on:** October 15, 2009, 05:31:27 PM »

Im in my wishing I could draw a tag phase.

boneaddict · « **Reply #6 on:** October 15, 2009, 05:36:59 PM »

Ultimately I think thats what sent me into my photography phase.

halflife65 · « **Reply #7 on:** October 15, 2009, 05:56:26 PM »

Steep, wet, windy, cold
Falling down mountain rock slides
Vine maple face slap

5, 7, 5?

rasbo · « **Reply #8 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:20:27 PM »

windy chills leaves drop down

frost will bite the foot thats slow

rut buck breeds hot doe

boneaddict · « **Reply #9 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:22:27 PM »

Excellent Rasbo, but your English Professor says you have to do that last line again. Has to be 5 syllables. I really like the beginning though

rasbo · « **Reply #10 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:32:55 PM »

Quote from: boneaddict on October 15, 2009, 06:22:27 PM

Excellent Rasbo, but your English Professor says you have to do that last line again. Has to be 5 syllables. I really like the beginning though

there I changed It, to long since I was schooled,I thought it was words..

boneaddict · « **Reply #11 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:35:31 PM »

Nice, I like it

boneaddict · « **Reply #12 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:38:08 PM »

Bighorn rams descend

their horns clash in competition

Coach wants to shoot one

Huntbear · « **Reply #13 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:41:17 PM »

ummmmmmmmmmmm never have figured out those haiku thingys.....

I say..

LETS GO HUNTING!!!

boneaddict · « **Reply #14 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:43:04 PM »

Lets go hunting now would work for your first line

7mag. · « **Reply #15 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:44:08 PM »

Quote from: boneaddict on October 15, 2009, 06:43:04 PM

Lets go hunting now would work for your first line

Who needs another line with an opener like that?

fremont · « **Reply #16 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:56:13 PM »

October neck swells
With back beginning to arch
Esterus cologne

finnman · « **Reply #17 on:** October 15, 2009, 06:57:19 PM »

It took me awhile to find my artistic side, I had to get a mirror to find it!!!

   Straining eyes peering
   bucks and does holding tight
   Winnett awaits us

I got the call today, PJ got her Montana buck tag today

!!!! Talk about last minute....We leave next Friday!!!! Can't wait!!!

halflife65 · « **Reply #18 on:** October 15, 2009, 11:56:25 PM »

Frigid winter days
Lonely mountain tops
Private reflections

And I don't mean reflecting your privates in your compass mirror.

Little Dave · « **Reply #19 on:** October 16, 2009, 12:57:35 AM »

I'll give this a try, see if I can write one too. How hard can it be?
Back in September, I hunted in the Swakane, here's how that hunt went...

Office work can wait
Deer tag burns in my pocket
Must leave town today

Road work at the pass
What on Earth were they thinking?
Other way next time

Cow elk in the road
High beams light her profile
She bolts just in time

Arrive in camp late
Moon rises from the mountain
Pitch tent in the dark

Two does at first light
In a draw at sixty yards
Great start to the day

Rain sets in by noon
Lightning strikes in the canyon
The deer are bed down

Best chance the next day
Buddy shoots an eight point buck
Deer jumped the arrow

Headed back Monday
With no deer from the Swakane
I'll wait for the snow

Wyoming08 · « **Reply #20 on:** October 16, 2009, 08:02:22 AM »

Deer on the ground Hunters delight
Ducks in flight Labradors on sight
Cold Beverage on ice, Now thats NICE!!!

halflife65 · « **Reply #21 on:** October 16, 2009, 08:12:00 AM »

Quote from: Wyoming08 on October 16, 2009, 08:02:22 AM

Deer on the ground Hunters delight
Ducks in flight Labradors on sight
Cold Beverage on ice, Now thats NICE!!!

Well, that's a nice poem, no doubt. You kind of missed the Haiku definition, though.

fishunt247 · « **Reply #22 on:** October 16, 2009, 08:42:08 AM »

You boys forgot titles for your poems. Minus ten points.

I like them. Especially fremont's.

fishunt247 · « **Reply #23 on:** October 16, 2009, 08:43:11 AM »

Wishing for Justice, That Scouting Pays Off

Study their patterns,
Sage to alfalfa and back,
Hope to intercept.

burrheadcountry · « **Reply #24 on:** October 16, 2009, 08:58:48 AM »

Go drive hike glass stalk,
Find trails beds rubs and horns,
enjoy tenderloin backstraps steaks mounted.

MagKarl · « **Reply #25 on:** October 16, 2009, 10:04:32 AM »

Not a modern dude
Pouring concrete for a friend
Good luck out there guys

halflife65 · « **Reply #26 on:** October 16, 2009, 10:07:10 AM »

Hike until you puke
Glass until your eyes go blind
Still never enough

Chesapeake · « **Reply #27 on:** October 16, 2009, 04:25:47 PM »

Fresh out of tags

High buck was very good,
my tag is already cut.
Have fun out there boys!

NWBREW · « **Reply #28 on:** October 16, 2009, 05:14:24 PM »

Sh!t... I missed
Sh!t... I missed
I'm all wet now
Sh!t... I pissed

It's not as pretty as most,....but I aint a poet.

WAPITIHUNTER · « **Reply #29 on:** October 16, 2009, 08:35:19 PM »

Haiku? I just read a few. Heck you may have just scanned through.

Many are leaving tonight even though budgets are tight.

Seeing a big buck in the morning........well they just might.

A bear upon they will stumble and they will bumble with much fright.

Sitting around camp tomorrow night with calves and thighs cramped oh so tight.

Wish it was I except the law took rifle hunting away from me.

All hunters will have a wonderful opening day with happiness and glee!

Not a Haiku but it's what I came up with.

Todd_ID · « **Reply #30 on:** October 16, 2009, 10:33:56 PM »

Quote from: boneaddict on October 15, 2009, 06:38:08 PM

Bighorn rams descend

their horns clash in competition

Coach wants to shoot one

Quite possibly an all-time great here!

DOUBLELUNG · « **Reply #31 on:** October 16, 2009, 10:37:30 PM »

Early sunrise sparkles frost
Buck lingers too late in sight
Torn lungs spill heart's blood

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