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What you did wrong is that you didn't have your camera on the fastest ISO possible. You shot these shots at ISO 800. You need a faster ISO (larger number) to get these shots at dusk. I can't see what shutter speed your camera was set at from the exif data but I see you had it on the fastest f-stop of f4.2. That was good. I looked up the specifications for your camera and they have the following options for ISO speeds:Sensitivity Auto ISOSelectable ISO (100, 200, 400, 800, 1250, 1600)High Sensitivity Mode (1600-6400) So you need to look in your manual and figure out how to turn your ISO up to 1600, 3200, and 6400. That is 3 full stops of light had you put your camera at 6400 ISO instead of 800. What does that mean? Your shutter speed was probably 1/15th of a second. That is really slow. The faster it is the better it stops the action. At ISO 6400 in this situation your shutter speed would be 1/125th of a second, much better (1/15 to 1/30 to 1/60 to 1/125) That would have stopped the action and got you the shot. Now you are probably asking me what the downside is to turning up the ISO so high? Noise or grain. And since your pictures were already really noisy at ISO 800, then 6400 would have been really noisy. However, a lot of noise is introduced when your exposure is off as well. These shots are underexposed and that added quite a bit of noise. Properly exposed shots at 6400 ISO would have worked in this case. Remember, you don't want to keep your ISO high all the time because all your shots will be noisy even when the light is good so lower your ISO when the light is good. Good luck and read that manual on how to adjust your ISO.