While I agree that getting an article on bowhunting in the NY Times is beneficial I found myself questioning the author's choice of words and descriptions at times. I guess the bottom line is that I felt it didn't exactly put bowhunting's best foot forward. Here are some the of sentences/phrases that frustrated me a bit.
1. "...had [bgcolor=#0000ff]slain[/bgcolor] 28 big-game" Perhaps he could have written harvested or killed or anything else; slain seems to take it to another level.
2. "Bow Hunters’" and "bow-hunting" A minor gripe here but when did bowhunter and/or bowhunting become two words or hyphenated?
3. "So from August to December, [bgcolor=#0000ff]elite[/bgcolor] hunters have descended on the tule range here in pursuit of a trophy elk." Elite is a bit of a over generalization. Sure Duggan has the super slam all with trad gear but to suggest that all bowhunters hunting tule elk are elite while nice to say is probably going a bit to far.
4. "the number of applications to hunt early in the season [bgcolor=#0000ff]nearly doubled [/bgcolor] to 566 in 2008 from 317 in 2007" While definitely a sizeable increase it is still 68 applications short of double. I guess he is rounding liberally.
5. "Hunted to near extinction after the Gold Rush, the tule population was protected by California law until its number surpassed 2,000 in the 1980s. Then the state game commission began granting permits to outfitters. [bgcolor=#0000ff]Despite the hunting, the population has grown to exceed 4,000 elk[/bgcolor]." I wish this point would have been made more clear. It was written from the glass half empty view point. Perhaps it could have said. Since then the support of sportsman has increased the herd size to over 4000.
6. "a weapon with pulleys and cables granting a range of 60 yards or more." While some bowhunters certainly take longer shots, this is another gross generalization. Oh and why is a gun a gun or a rifle a rifle but here a bow becomes a "weapon?" And I am being too sensitive?
7. "In five days of hunting, Mr. Duggan would [bgcolor=#0000ff]fire[/bgcolor] only once..." Come on... there is no trigger to pull on a trad bow, no powder to ignite... Shoot might have been a better choice.
8. "holding back for fear of [bgcolor=#0000ff]maiming[/bgcolor] his prey." Yes maiming is synonymous with wounding or injuring but doesn't it sound much more ominous? Perhaps it could have been mentioned that he had too much respect for the animal to take a risky shot?
9. "He left wet and tired and empty-handed." I wonder if these were Mr. Duggan's thoughts. Sure he was probably bummed about eating tag soup but perhaps he will cherish the memories that he took home with me of the hunt.
Anyway those were my thoughts. I wasn't really considering the money that spent on the landowner tags and the effects it has on the sport; that is a discussion for another time.